2022年3月2日雅思大作文解析

三月春光匆匆，已經過去一周了，大家的雅思準備得如何呀？快來看看3月得第一場考試——3月2日的雅思大作文回顧吧！

首先來看3月2日的雅思大作文回顧&分析 3月2日 雅思大作文題

個(ge) 人數據安全：

越來越多人在網上存儲(chu) 個(ge) 人信息(網購, 網銀, 社交)Positive or negative?

題目解析： 總體(ti) 認為(wei) 個(ge) 人信息存在網上是一種負向的發展

主體(ti) 段1: 這樣做確實可能帶來便利

分論點1: 網購網銀方麵的便利就是節省了時間, 不用重複輸入這些信息

分論點2: 社交方麵, 披露了個(ge) 人信息, 方便找人和被找

主體(ti) 段2: 個(ge) 人信息被盜會(hui) 導致被騙錢

主體(ti) 段3：個(ge) 人信息被盜本身就是隱私受到侵害

想要在雅思考試大作文上拿高分，不僅(jin) 要結構清晰，論證有力，高級、地道、專(zhuan) 業(ye) 的表達也非常重要。

不同的話題涉及到的專(zhuan) 業(ye) 術語大相徑庭，隻有準確地表達你的觀點，舉(ju) 出恰當而又說服力的例子才能讓文章脫穎而出。 讓我們(men) 來看看這次我們(men) 能學到哪些與(yu) 這次話題相關(guan) 的高分詞組和短語吧！
3月2日高分詞組短語

Defining benefit 明顯好處

Delivery and billing address收貨和賬單地址

Targeted groups of people 目標人群

Date theft 數據竊取

Grim threat 嚴(yan) 峻威脅

Financial loss 財物損失

Layers of firewalls 層層防火牆

Sensitive, private information 敏感的個(ge) 人信息

Core elements 核心成分

Custom officer 海關(guan) 人員

Distribution of loss and gain 損益分布

如果你能夠掌握以上表達，那麽(me) 你在這個(ge) 話題上已經成功了一半，而剩下的另一半則取決(jue) 於(yu) 語法的準確性及多樣性。

用正確的語法不扣分，用更複雜的句式來高效有力地表達觀點能大幅加分！

在這裏給大家分享了獨家範文中涉及到的9大高分語法句型，大家快學起來，靈活運用起來！

3月2日高分句子語法

1.Once personal information, such as delivery and billing address and credit card number, is stored in the system, there is no need to type in this kind of information repeatedly whenever a new order is placed or a wire transfer is initiated. 時間狀語

2.For example, creating such personal labels as hobbies helps users to find other like-minded people. 非謂語動詞

3.I myself, a frantic collector of fashion shoes, joined the Canadian Sneaker Community on Facebook, making new friends who share the same love of sneakers. 結果狀語

4.However, this development is not an unalloyed good as it midwifed a surge in data theft, which has incurred two main losses. 原因狀語, 非限定定語從(cong) 句

5.First, those who trust the existing online data protection mechanism face grim threat of financial loss. 限定性定語從(cong) 句

6.As long as they are determined, Black Hats, as hackers with malicious intents are called, can usually manage to bypass layers of firewalls installed by computer experts and steal sensitive, private information stored in online accounts. 條件狀語, 分詞作定語

7.Afterwards, they either sell this information to a third party, which is less profitable but less troublesome, or use this information to extract every last penny from the victim, which requires more skills but brings more handsome returns. 非限定定語從(cong) 句

8.This is because leakage of this kind of information would make them feel exposed to the strange, outside world,  where they have inadequate protection. 非限定定語從(cong) 句

9.No sooner had he demanded 200 dollars from me to clear an international parcel, which was actually non-existent, that I realized that he was a con and my personal information and privacy were lost. 倒裝 吃透Shelby大神的這篇作文精華分享，雅思寫(xie) 作提分水到渠成~

礙於(yu) 篇幅原因今天的雅思大作文就先解析到這裏啦～