2022雅思首考大作文最強解析

一轉眼,2022年的第一場雅思紙筆考試已經結束啦~
有沒有勇考新年第一場雅思的同學? 如果你是還未上岸的“烤鴨”,那你一定要時時關(guan) 注2022年的雅思考情動態和走向,畢竟“知己知彼,百戰不殆”。

接下來,就讓我們(men) 一起來分析下1月8日的首考雅思大作文題目吧!

2022.01.08題目

Some people agree that the best way to become successful in life is to get the university education, others disagree with it and reckon that nowadays it is no longer be true. D & G

題目分析: 首考的這道題雖然是全新題,但考察的核心內(nei) 容依然是大學教育的實質,屬於(yu) 換湯不換藥。 類似的題目還有:

2018.11.17 成功要素學校不教
Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2017.06.08 理論課程 vs 實際課程
Some think that practical subjects are more important than theoretical subjects in university, and the latter will be replaced by the former in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

2017.06.17 上大學導致失業(ye)
Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young people university educated, others think sending young people to universities only leads to graduate unemployment. D & G.

思路分析:
題目中最核心的詞是best。正方可以說大學教育如何提高成功的概率,反方可以說還有其他的成功途徑。
另外,盡量把成功限定在職業(ye) 成功,避免談及家庭成功、育兒(er) 成功等等,因為(wei) 這些內(nei) 容大學不教。  在分析完了思路後,我們(men) 就可以進一步寫(xie) 出以下的大作文框架:

主體(ti) 段

1:正方: 大學教育能提高職業(ye) 成功的可能性

分論點1: 大學文憑增加了工作穩定性,使人們(men) 的工作更難被機器和移民所替代。沒有工作穩定性,工作的成功也實現不了。

分論點2: 大學掌握的知識與(yu) 技能更能讓人們(men) 在崗位上大展拳腳

主體(ti) 段

2: 反方: 大學不是成功的最好途徑

分論點1: 很多職業(ye) 不需要大學教育也能取得成功

分論點2: 很多崗位需要專(zhuan) 業(ye) 知識,但專(zhuan) 業(ye) 知識也可通過大學之外的渠道來獲取

主體(ti) 段

3:自己觀點: 對普通人來說,大學教育還是成功的必要條件

分論點1: 天賦之人太少了,普通人還是要有文憑才能找好工作,取得成功

分論點2: 大學不僅(jin) 傳(chuan) 授知識,還培養(yang) 技能,但其他獲取信息的途徑並不能培養(yang) 技能

另外,不知道有沒有同學從(cong) 上文列出的類似題目中發現,這篇文章的反方觀點還可以這樣寫(xie) : 1 現在大學很多課程都不培養(yang) 實踐技能/都不教對就業(ye) 有用的內(nei) 容,導致用人單位看不上大學生→大學教育無法導致成功

2 大學生人數太多,崗位競爭(zheng) 太激烈,失業(ye) 率高→連工作都沒有,事業(ye) 成功更無從(cong) 談起  怎麽(me) 樣,分析完正反方的論點和寫(xie) 作大綱後,對於(yu) 如何答這道題,是不是瞬間清晰了很多? 當然,想要在大作文上拿高分,僅(jin) 做好任務回應度 (Task Response) 這一個(ge) 方麵是遠遠不夠的。你的詞匯豐(feng) 富程度 (lexical resources)也要能跟上你想表達的內(nei) 容。

這就給同學們(men) 分享education這個(ge) 話題下,適用於(yu) 答這道題的高分短語和表達,要抓緊記到小本本上哦~

Cudgel one’s head to do 絞盡腦汁

Secret sauce for sth 秘訣

An underlying enabler of 先決(jue) 條件

Necessary condition for sth 必要條件

Theoretical knowledge and practical skills 專(zhuan) 業(ye) 知識和實用技能

Fulfill job duties 履行工作職責

Knowledge-based, globalized economy全球化的知識經濟

Critical thinking ability 批判性思維

Interdisciplinary knowledge 跨專(zhuan) 業(ye) 知識

Career prospect 職業(ye) 前景

A wide array of 多種

Physical gifts 身體(ti) 天賦

Master key 萬(wan) 能鑰匙

Academic fields 學術領域

Key word 關(guan) 鍵詞

Search engine 搜索引擎

Hone one’s skill(s) 打磨技術

Self-taught expert 自學成才

Surplus to requirement 多餘(yu)

Pale in comparison with 相形見絀

如果你對自己的寫(xie) 作分數有更高的要求,那麽(me) 在語法多樣性及準確性 (grammar range and accuracy) 肯定要下更多的功夫。
那麽(me) 問題來了,究竟什麽(me) 樣的語法句式會(hui) 給你的寫(xie) 作加分呢? 在這裏給大家分享了獨家範文中涉及到的10大高分語法句型:

1. Advocates of higher education believes that a college degree is an underlying enabler of job security, a necessary condition for career success. 同位語

2. it is the two defining features of modern economy, namely automation and globalization, that warrant the necessity of college education for ordinary people. 強調句

3. The critical thinking ability they acquire through writing essays helps them view work-related issues with few biases; the process they follow when doing academic research in school allows them to approach problems arising in work in a systematic fashion; the interdisciplinary knowledge they gain from a wide range of college courses enable them to come up with innovative ideas. Ambitious people cudgel their heads to find the secret sauce for success in life. Some view college education as the answer, while others disagree. 排比的定語從(cong) 句

4. All of this helps to boost their productivity, thus brightening their career prospect. 非謂語動詞做結果狀語

5. There is a wide array of careers that do not require a bachelor degree as a prerequisite for professional accomplishments. 限定性定語從(cong) 句

6. Were they to become full-time college students, they would squander precious time that could be spent on developing their physicality and honing their skills. 虛擬語氣 + 倒裝

7. Even though professional knowledge is instrumental in achieving success for other careers, universities are no longer the sole place for acquiring such knowledge, as nowadays people can access it through numerous conduits. 讓步狀語從(cong) 句嵌套原因狀語從(cong) 句

8. One of them is the Internet, the master key to knowledge of all academic fields. 同位語

9. After a user types the key word into a search engine, it fetches dozens, if not hundreds, of relevant online articles with links for related reading materials. 時間狀語從(cong) 句

10. And although the Internet offers almost unlimited access to information, it pales in comparison with traditional higher education in terms of developing people’s marketable skills. 讓步狀語從(cong) 句 如果能吃透上麵的10大語法句型,相信你的雅思作文語法分,一定會(hui) 有個(ge) 質的飛躍! 礙於(yu) 篇幅原因今天的雅思首考大作文就先解析到這裏啦~

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