雅思考分作文範文：出國工作生活還是在國內？

Some people think it is better to go to foreign countries for better work and living opportunities. Others think it is better to stay in their home country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. （2022/5/7）

審題與(yu) 解析

本周考題是近5周出現的唯一新題。

本題設問：為(wei) 了更好的工作和生活機會(hui) ，我們(men) 是出國好，還是留在國內(nei) 好？

這個(ge) 雖然是新題，但問題非常簡單，也非常熟悉，因此，本周考生比較幸運。

題目涉及“工作和生活”，因此基本上涵蓋了所有範圍，這是本周題目比較容易的另一個(ge) 原因：題目並沒要求限定在某個(ge) 範圍內(nei) 討論，因此不容易跑題（隻要不寫(xie) 出國學習(xi) 就可以了）。

一般寫(xie) 法當然是：先寫(xie) 出國的好處，再寫(xie) 留在國內(nei) 的好處，最後給出自己的觀點。這種寫(xie) 法是典型的雙邊討論。

但也可以這樣寫(xie) ：

1. 出國可以開闊視野，獲得新奇的生活和工作體(ti) 驗，但是出國工作和生活也會(hui) 帶來麻煩：比如需要重新適應新的環境和文化，需要建立新的朋友圈子，而且還有可能遭受當地人的歧視，甚至暴力。

2. 反之，如果留在國內(nei) ，這些問題基本可以避免，但是留在國內(nei) 就意味著必須在一個(ge) 你熟悉的世界裏掙紮，結果讓你陷入到工作和生活的無聊圈子裏無法自拔，從(cong) 而影響到你理想的實現和更高的追求。

3. 因此，是否出國取決(jue) 於(yu) 你是否已經在文化上和心理上做好了準備，同時取決(jue) 於(yu) 你是否有新的理想和目標需要去國外實現。如果答案都是no，那麽(me) 留在國內(nei) 也許是更好的選擇。

高分範文

Now many people choose to go to other countries for better work and living opportunities. This choice, however, may not be as desirable as it appears.

Going to foreign countries, as is argued, enables people to obtain brand new opportunities and experience in both work and life, yet it may also bring about numerous troubles. The new comers have to spend tremendous amount of time making new friends and adjusting themselves to an environment and culture completely different from that in their home country. In fact, I have seen many immigrants who have never really been assimilated into the new culture. Furthermore, people living in a foreign country may very likely be subject to the racial discrimination, which will make their work and living unbearable.     

All these problems can be avoided if people choose to stay in their home country, but to work and live in such a familiar environment may be a disadvantage at the same time. For those people stuck in their present position, it is unlikely for them to get a promotion if they do not seek a change. For those who have a high regard of themselves and have personal ambitions to achieve, hanging around with their friends in the home country would be boring and a total waste of time.

It is, therefore, important to ask yourself a few questions before you make up your mind to go to a foreign country. For instance, have you been ready, both culturally and psychologically, to live in a different country? Do you have dreams (in life as well as work) whose realization makes it absolutely necessary that you live in a foreign country? If the answers to these questions are “no”, I would suggest that people stay in their home country and live as happily as they can. 

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本範文精華語料

as desirable as it appears 和看起來一樣可取

numerous troubles 許多麻煩

tremendous amount of time 大量時間

adjust themselves to... 調整自己以適應......

immigrant 移民

be assimilated into... 融入......

be subject to... 遭受......

hang around with... 和......混在一起

make up one's mind to do... 決(jue) 定做......