12.16大陸雅思大作文7分範文及解析：成功最好的方式是上大學

雙邊類大作文，社會(hui) 類話題

Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays, this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

題目來源：2023年12月16日大陸雅思大作文（重複2022年1月8日大陸考題）

1、題目大意

一些人認為(wei) 獲得成功的最好的方式是上大學，但是其他人不這麽(me) 認為(wei) 。討論雙方觀點並給出自己的觀點。

2、思路解析

這是一道雙邊類大作文，討論的是上大學是不是讓人獲得成功的最好辦法。雙邊類的題目，需要對每個(ge) 觀點分別表達同意或反對，最終的結論就是我的立場，可以是中立（雙方都同意或都反對），也可以是單邊支持某一方立場。審題需要注意兩(liang) 點，一是觀點1有絕對詞best，即為(wei) 了達到成功人生這一目的，上大學這一策略是否是“最好的”。一般看到有絕對詞的觀點，都可以持反對角度。二是觀點2隻是表達不同意觀點1的觀點，並沒有增加額外的信息。因此我們(men) 可以讚同後者，即“為(wei) 了獲得成功，上大學並不是最好的辦法”，下麵王珍老師就帶大家看下具體(ti) 的內(nei) 容。

首先，成功的本身定義(yi) 是模糊的，有的人認為(wei) 家庭圓滿是成功，而有的人認為(wei) 事業(ye) 順利是成功。不同定義(yi) 的成功所需要當事人具備的要素也是不同的。

讀大學確實能夠讓人學到更多知識和專(zhuan) 業(ye) 技能、提升人的學曆。更高的學曆能夠讓人在尋找工作時獲得優(you) 勢，而知識和技能則能讓人更好的處理工作或科研時遇到的問題。

但是，除了專(zhuan) 業(ye) 技能外，許多其他要素是無法通過讀大學獲得的。比如，對於(yu) 把家庭圓滿作為(wei) 成功標準的人來說，一個(ge) 好的伴侶(lv) 和誠實善良、對感情忠貞不渝的品質都是非常重要的，而這些要素並不是通過讀大學就能獲得的，好的個(ge) 人品質可能需要通過良好的家庭教育等才能獲得，而一個(ge) 合適的伴侶(lv) 則需要機遇和不斷尋找才能遇到。

其次，哪怕在事業(ye) 成功之類範圍下，單就讀大學而言不一定能促使成功。

一方麵現在大學教育的普及，導致大學生變多不再具有稀缺屬性，讀大學無法成為(wei) 一種相較於(yu) 他人而言的必然存在優(you) 勢。

另一方麵，事業(ye) 成功可能需要機會(hui) 和運氣，這些並不是大學所能帶來的。同時，大學教育並不適用於(yu) 所有人，要考進大學往往需要學生足夠好的考試成績才可以。而對於(yu) 學業(ye) 成績不好的學生來說，通過職業(ye) 技術培訓學習(xi) 專(zhuan) 業(ye) 技能，或者未來持續的自主學習(xi) ，同樣有機會(hui) 能夠獲得事業(ye) 成功。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

In spite of the fact that the world is undergoing various changes in recent years, what are the key factors to achieve success still remains one of the most heatedly discussed issues. There are some people who argue that attending college is the best way to succeed, while others hold the opposite opinion. Personally, I prefer the latter.

The first reason why I cannot regard this as the best method lies in the fact that acquiring college qualification alone can no longer be a superiority when facing the fierce competition today. In other words, with the approach of knowledge society, some regions in the world have gradually achieved the popularization of higher education, and even in some developed countries, the number of graduate and doctoral students is also soaring, so only having received undergraduate education is no longer preferred by the company in the workplace. Besides, with social advances, the factors that promote success, such as better social relationships, family background, and personal appearance, have become more diversified, by which I mean without any conditions mentioned above, the probability of success is extremely slight even if one has graduated from the college.

In addition, there do exist better factors to achieve success. More specifically, the elements of a person's success can be divided into congenital conditions and acquired efforts. If a person is born with advantages in appearance, intelligence and wealth, making good use of these innate advantages can facilitate him or her to achieve success at a very young age, just like many young stars in China at present. However, for most ordinary people who do not obtain these inherited advantages, hard-working persistence, and determination are very important qualities. In other words, due to poverty or other reasons, even if someone gives up university education, and chooses to be engaged in vocational work, as long as they persist in honing their own skills and insisting on innovation, they can also achieve achievements in their own fields.

Admittedly, although the definition of success is quite different for each individual, the fundamentals for achieving a goal will forever remain the same. As mentioned above, university education has been popularized in many countries, that is to say, this has become one of the most basic conditions in current competition. However, if one wants to have an advantage over others in knowledge, people should not only meet the requirements of undergraduate education, but also adhere to lifelong learning.

In conclusion, it seems to me that attending college is not the best way to achieve success mainly because there are other elements and methods to succeed.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Qualification 學位

Superiority 優(you) 勢條件

knowledge society 知識社會(hui)

Popularization 普及

social relationships 人脈

congenital conditions 先天條件

Innate 先天的

Persistence 堅持

lifelong learning 終身學習(xi)