12.2大陸雅思大作文8分範文及解析：私家車增加的利弊

利弊類大作文，交通類話題

More and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

題目來源：2023年12月2日大陸雅思大作文（重複2015年10月8日亞(ya) 太考題）

1、題目大意

越來越多的人購買(mai) 並使用自己的汽車。你認為(wei) 這種趨勢對個(ge) 人的好處大於(yu) 對環境的壞處嗎？

2、思路解析

這是一道利弊類大作文，聊的是私家車增加的利弊問題。利弊類大作文需要強調在論證上體(ti) 現合理性，即在具體(ti) 的分析中，明確能體(ti) 現出一邊的論述的確是大於(yu) 另一邊，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有說服力並不取決(jue) 於(yu) 觀點的數量，而是內(nei) 容是否有說服力。審題時注意兩(liang) 點，一是討論對象是“私家車”而非其他交通工具，二是利弊分析分別限定在“對個(ge) 人的好處”和“對環境的壞處”，在此之外的討論可能會(hui) 偏題。下麵，王珍老師帶大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看對於(yu) 個(ge) 人的好處，有兩(liang) 方麵。

一是提升個(ge) 人出行便利性的自由度。私家車使個(ge) 人能夠隨時出行，無需等待公共交通，尤其是遇到緊急情況時，比如家人突發疾病需要送醫。而對於(yu) 住在偏遠或公共交通不便的地區的人們(men) 來說，私家車是基本的出行工具。

二是私家車提供了更好的出行體(ti) 驗。在私家車內(nei) ，乘客可以避免擁擠和他人的打擾，甚至可以根據自己的喜好調節空調、音樂(le) 等。

再來看對於(yu) 環境的壞處，有三方麵。

一是造成空氣汙染和溫室氣體(ti) 排放。燃油汽車的尾氣排放是城市空氣汙染的主要來源，包括二氧化碳、氮氧化物等。同時汽車排放的溫室氣體(ti) 會(hui) 加劇全球氣候變暖的問題。

二是燃油車的增加會(hui) 帶來更大的能源消耗，導致化石燃料開采和加工進一步增加，在此過程中產(chan) 生的燃料泄露或是廢物排放，都會(hui) 對環境造成嚴(yan) 重汙染。

三是大量的汽車報廢後，由於(yu) 大部分材料無法降解，進而產(chan) 生了大量的固體(ti) 垃圾。在處理過程中可能會(hui) 對環境進一步造成破壞。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

It has been a popular trend that a growing number of people tend to buy their own cars. While its benefits to individuals are beyond doubt, I would say that detrimental effects of the driving trend on environment are far outweighing.

From an individual perspective, the trend of life-on-wheels can be seen as positive for both comfortable and convenient reasons. Firstly, it is not difficult to imagine the comfort of driving to work in comparison with the feeling of being sandwiched in the packed subway during rush hours. Also, for some travelers who need to commute between cities frequently, driving by themselves is sometimes a relatively more affordable and convenient alternative to air flights, which is more expensive and irritating when considering the cumbersome security procedures at airports, if not the commonplace delay.

However, these superficial benefits mentioned above are not justified enough to offset its damage to the environment. Out of all the problems, the carbon dioxide commissions stand out as the most serious symptom of the problem to which I see the prevailing driving lifestyle as the answer. Another apprehension we cannot afford to ignore is potential exhaustion of fuel energy with the rising number of cars. Some might argue that both problems could be mitigated by the electronic car, which are reckoned as a cleaner and energy saving alternative to its traditional counterparts in the near future. Nevertheless, this might lead to a new problem: how to deal with the discarded old models? Given the fact that most of their materials and engines are non-biodegradable, they might stay in the junk yard for decades.

In conclusion, although the benefits of private cars cannot be denied, I would say these merits for individuals should be at the sacrifice of environment.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Life-on-wheels 生活方式以車為(wei) 中心

Sandwiched in the packed subway 擠在擁擠的地鐵裏

Cumbersome security procedures 繁瑣的安檢程序

Carbon dioxide commissions 二氧化碳排放

Potential exhaustion of fuel energy 燃料能源的潛在枯竭

Electronic car 電動車

Non-biodegradable 不可生物降解的

Junk yard 垃圾場

At the sacrifice of 以...為(wei) 犧牲