雅思寫作母語教師範文：怎麽改善不健康的飲食習慣？

今天，給大家帶來一個(ge) IELTS雅思大作文真題（2021.12.18）的原創範文。

題目：

Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for them. Why? What are effective ways to improve people's eating habits?

審題：

Type: Report 報告類 (Reason and solution 理由&解決(jue) 方案)

Body 1: Reasons: laziness and convenience

Body 2: Solution: Education and regulation

Key words: why/effective ways to improve

- Model Answer 高分範文-

A great swathe of the population enjoys eating food that is non-nutritious and that has a deleterious effect on their health despite knowing this is the case. This essay shall explore the reasons behind this phenomenon, along with suggesting methods that could help people to eat more healthily.

One of the major causes behind this habit of eating unhealthy food is that many of these foods are convenient to either purchase or prepare. This is especially true when it comes to the fast-food industry, whereby instead of finding healthy alternatives, many people will simply opt for the easy and time-saving method of ordering from McDonald's or KFC, or other such junk food outlets. Likewise, in today’s world of disposable goods and ready-to-use products, many have become lazy and would rather elect for opening a package of processed food than to spend the time buying healthy ingredients to cook by themselves.

To counteract this trend of unhealthy eating, probably the most effective method that can be brought to bear on this trend is that of education. Just as Mcdonald's understands that marketing to children can help secure future consumers, so society should understand that by educating the young about the benefits of eating healthy food, they are more likely to avoid unhealthy foods in their later life. Government regulations can also help to squelch peoples’ desire for foods that in the long-term can have a devasting effect on health, with such policies as an anti-fat tax or an extra tax on foods that contain additives proven to be toxic, helping to guide citizens’ dietary habits.

In conclusion, the main impetuses for people to acquire an unhealthy dietary tendency are those of convenience and laziness, and that both education, especially of the young, and governmental regulatory policies, can help to overcome this negative trend within society.

- Essay Analysis 範文解析 -

- (1) Introduction

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 題目改述:

Many people = A great swathe of the population
like to eat = enjoys eating
unhealthy food = food that is non-nutritious and that has a deleterious effect on their health
even though = despite knowing

Standard Phrase for the “Report” type essay 報告類大作文高分句型：