雅思大作文7分範文及解析：暴力電影遊戲禁止or無害

雙邊類大作文，犯罪類話題

Films and computer games containing violence are popular now. Some people think they have a negative effect on society and should be banned while other people think they are harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

題目來源：2011年10月29日大陸雅思大作文

1、題目大意

含有暴力的電影和電腦遊戲現在很流行。有些人認為(wei) 它們(men) 對社會(hui) 有負麵影響應該被禁止，而另一些人認為(wei) 它們(men) 是無害的娛樂(le) 。討論這雙方觀點並給出自己的意見。

2、思路解析

這是一道雙邊類大作文，聊的是暴力電影或遊戲是否應該被禁止。雙邊類大作文，需要對每個(ge) 觀點分別表達同意或反對，最終的結論就是我的立場，可以是中立（雙方都同意或都反對），也可以是單邊支持某一方立場。審題時要注意兩(liang) 點，首先第一句話是背景句不需要討論，其次“banned”和“harmless entertainment”屬於(yu) 絕對詞且雙方觀點完全對立，因此這題可以持雙反。下麵，月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體(ti) 觀點。

首先來看暴力電影遊戲並非無害的原因，有兩(liang) 方麵。

帶有暴力元素的遊戲或電影可能會(hui) 對青少年產(chan) 生誤導。在虛擬世界中，許多暴力行為(wei) 並不會(hui) 受到懲罰，而青少年本身心智及價(jia) 值觀不成熟，他們(men) 可能會(hui) 誤認為(wei) 這些行為(wei) 在現實世界中是可行的，進而模仿。

其次電影遊戲可能會(hui) 讓人產(chan) 生不良的刻板印象。例如，如果一部電影或遊戲將一個(ge) 群體(ti) 描繪成暴力和好鬥的人群，它可能會(hui) 給讓讓人覺得這些特征現實中普遍的，進而導致歧視和偏見。

再來看不應該完全禁止的原因，同樣有兩(liang) 個(ge) 角度。

一方麵帶有暴力元素的遊戲或電影能讓人體(ti) 驗到現實生活中不存在經曆和角色，比如成為(wei) 一名警察或士兵。同時，緊張刺激的劇情能夠緩解人們(men) 的壓力，甚至是在遊戲中釋放負麵情緒而非在現實中。

另一方麵絕大多數成年人理應能夠分清楚現實與(yu) 虛擬直接差別，而對於(yu) 孩子來說，父母則應該擔負起監管責任而非甩鍋給某個(ge) 事物。與(yu) 此同時，這些電影或遊戲也有可能產(chan) 生積極作用，其中正麵的人物和劇情同樣有可能激發人們(men) 的正義(yi) 感。

3、提綱

4、高分範文示例

The inclusion of violence in entertainment mediums such as films and video games has been the subject of debate for decades. Someone believes that violent products are harmless forms of recreation. Even though violent products have some valid points, the problems they cause must be taken seriously.

Due to their commercial success and widespread popularity, it would be unnecessary to prohibit movies and video games with violent themes, such as crimes, gun-shooting, and gangsterism. First, these products with a hot-tempered theme offer a way to  release negative emotions in a safer environment than the real world. This is beneficial for individuals who work or study under pressure all week. In addition, through the narratives of films and the characters they control in video games, people can explore a broad range of life experiences. As an illustration, if a player assumes the role of a police officer in a video game, they may feel a greater sense of responsibility and justice as a result of their actions.

On the other side, the violence has an effect on the audience, especially the children. Despite the fact that most nations have laws restricting access to films and video games intended for adults, these products are still readily accessible to teenagers. Video games can influence immature people's values and morals. For instance, mass murders and robberies will not be punished in the virtual world, which will confuse youth about what constitutes right and wrong behavior. Therefore, a preoccupation with violent media such as movies and video games may result in a rise in actual crimes and acts of violence on college campuses. There is a need for stricter regulation of violent films and video games in order to prevent or at least mitigate the negative effects these media have on adolescents' thoughts and actions.

To summarize, due to the entertainment value of violent media such as movies and video games, absolute prohibitions on these types of media are impossible to execute; yet they should be regulated because of their potential risks.

5、相關(guan) 詞匯和語法結構

Gangsterism 幫派鬥爭(zheng)

hot-tempered 火爆的

role-playing 角色扮演

outlaw 亡命之徒

classified legislation 分級管理